Needs More...
First off, that little red gauge looks like a loading gauge and makes it look like it hasn't loaded yet. Secondly, more sound would be nice. After that it's all up to the maker to add some more to make it a more complete video.
Needs More...
First off, that little red gauge looks like a loading gauge and makes it look like it hasn't loaded yet. Secondly, more sound would be nice. After that it's all up to the maker to add some more to make it a more complete video.
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Alright, there is seriously nothing that wasn't servilely ripped on here. Even the EMO RANGERS got theirs. If you haven't seen the emo rangers you might want to just to understand. But as far as a parody flash goes this is probably one of the best. If there is a sequel made I wanna see it!
The Emo Rangers scene was done as a tribute to them, so I'm well aware.
Needs More...
Your one Pic was Awesome, but it takes a bit more than one pic and a song to make a video.
Come on only one frame?!?
Good song, Nice Pic, but you couldn't have at least thrown some old weird hypnotic shit in there to screw with all the high ass stoners?
I could have, but...I was kinda...distracted.
Yeay!!! I like pie!
So much Pain! So much Sorrow! So much Man on Man action... how could you not like it... Really this is one of the few that might actually have a chance for survival... XP
You know I haven't had a flash blammed in like, a year, right? :-D
I am glad you enjoyed...it is indeed a sad story. How dare that judge tell me 'eight is too young?'
We're all children at heart!!!
O_O
Needs a Little more...
The addition of sound to this improved it a lot, but if more plot was added before the end it would make the joke a hell of a lot more funny. Seriously, all that needs to be done is about 20 more seconds adding on to how pathetic that person is just to build up to the killing and it will be pretty good. Besides that, good luck!
Hm...what exactly do you mean?
Right now I'm working on an animation with a complete storyline, and it's gonne kick ass. Wish me luck!
Nice...
That's pretty good for just being some random things put together... It kinda took me a while to realize it was a loop though, damn ADD!
With a little editing this could be great!
OK so there is a good idea here. But I see the problem. Since the animation was crude, the ending might be too. Now if a LOT more was to the ending this would be a shit ton funnier (a shit ton being a little over a metric ton). So just improve on that and re-submit.
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Really this just seems to be imitating that squirrel from illwillpress and you can't understand it. Maybe if the hotdog and chicken had more background it would be better. Maybe if the chicken was a straight man who didn't care and didn't wanna be chopped up that would be funny. But... right now this needs a lot more length added to it along with some more jokes to add that little something to it to make a classic video. Besides that, it was a great idea with a lot of work needed.
What ilwillpress are you going on about?
Just Plain Good
I really liked this... Maybe it was because the main character looked like Spike Spiegel. But, in any case this was a very well put together animation including all the fine points you want in a music video. Take notes and live by them everybody.
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